Mariam, I really liked your poem that is called 'Tick tock on the clock' because it had a certain kind of way of rhythm in your poem and also you made me kind of laugh because you just wrote the same thing that is happening during the class time. I have no suggestions!
Mariam, I really liked your poem that is called 'Tick tock on the clock' because it had a certain kind of way of rhythm in your poem and also you made me kind of laugh because you just wrote the same thing that is happening during the class time. I have no suggestions!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poems that you wrote because they cary a lot of emotion
ReplyDeletei really liked the rythym in tick tock on the clock
ReplyDeleteI love my stone the poem the way you said it it had lots of emotion and expression.
ReplyDeleteMariam, your poetry evokes emotion. well done! I enjoyed your Tick Tock poem. Keep writing!
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